Heya, so I'm gonna be making a thread to post my poetry, because I actively write poems (if I'm not awfully busy) and I'm interested in what you guys think about it! Feel free to shred it COMPLETELY to your whims, I have nothing against criticism and feedback. But do try to be at least somewhat helpful in your critiques. Here's one I wrote some time ago:
All Little Corpses
"A little death can do no harm,
For it is death that gives life charm.
At once, God claimed it absolute -
All little corpses die for good.
It’s known to all who learn to crawl,
That only time tells when they fall.
And turn to dirt, as time shall pass,
Over the dirt shall spring forth grass.
And on this grass new men shall stand,
Of whom some find their lifetimes bland.
So why should other men dispute,
When corpses choose to die for good?"
Oh, and if you want to share yours, go ahead! I'll give feedback to each & every one posted in this thread.