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    Default poetry corner. let's get serious, bitches.

    beat me to death
    my blood bleeding from my flesh
    shall be singing songs of the northern nazi punk bitches killaz
    ill be true to myself, since i be born till i fucking die
    i shall never be a punk-ass loser and i wont lie
    Ill better die, but never sacrifie
    freedom for money-gold shit bleeding
    i suck sox instead of sucking cocks
    i know my name aint shining through
    im just a little motherfucker named Lue

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    Quote Originally Posted by Linas View Post
    beat me to death
    my blood bleeding from my flesh
    shall be singing songs of the northern nazi punk bitches killaz
    ill be true to myself, since i be born till i fucking die
    i shall never be a punk-ass loser and i wont lie
    Ill better die, but never sacrifie
    freedom for money-gold shit bleeding
    i suck sox instead of sucking cocks
    i know my name aint shining through
    im just a little motherfucker named Lue
    cheer up emo kid
    stop being such a freak

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    I didn't take note of any definite meter in your poetry. Do you care to try again?

    On the other hand, you're sexy, so I love you <3.

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    ~“She is fast my wife, but save we do, th’denunciation lack.”

    My soul and I are one, in perfect silence.
    In unity or distance we are one
    In song or sience we are one. I fear
    Not that she can ever leave me, for the fire
    Of her soul is of much plenty andif the plenty stays
    Tis but for her.
    I long for you and long against you
    Play me like a bell
    I am a lyre for your awesome wonder
    I am infinite before your strength.
    I am become all, or will be, for my knowledge
    Of you is greater that myself:
    I have no fear for you, for you are watching
    Whether I pass or stop, or stay or end, you are always with me
    The hours and the hours all unfolding
    Cannot put an end to you, as hot, as ripe as heaven
    You are the combined powers of my belated ending
    You are the awareness that I come after Sigmund Freud
    Do I hate you for ruining my relations with women?
    Could I ever hate you? No, not you, the iron rod of myself
    Without whom: in my flesh, no power. Secret strength
    Invisible holy aura, sacred magic, God of me
    Reverberate loudly. Make your shout across the hills
    Make grand noise.

    I hold fast to my silence. It is me.
    The reticence with which I treat myself
    Is what I am, and what I always will be.
    I wake up every morning bright as dawn
    And smile secret, counting every name.
    I glory in it. It’s brilliant and it’s awesome.
    It is glory. I smile and dance upon it, only it
    Is what I find most valuable in me.
    I oppose it to my silence,
    I am both, and all, and either
    And in the fleetingness of things I find their wonder.

    Shine out bright for me, O sacred Name.
    Shine out bright for me; I am your brother.
    We were of the same stuff made,
    And on the same hill of the gods learned trade
    And ‘neath the same eye of the blue-bright heavens
    We were taught the secrets of the earth.

    I am as much a child of God as Thee,
    So read me in your glory, make me known,
    Exalt me as the equal of your glory
    Make me similar unto your great power
    Shout me rooftop’d: I will lay with you
    Together, holy glory, we will read
    The secrets deep within you, and that light.


    All dancing with the silence.
    Not a rule, just a trend.

    IEI. Probably Fe subtype. Pretty sure I'm E4, sexual instinctual type, fairly confident that I'm a 3 wing now, so: IEI-Fe E4w3 sx/so. Considering 3w4 now, but pretty sure that 4 fits the best.

    Yes 'a ma'am that's pretty music...

    I am grateful for the mystery of the soul, because without it, there could be no contemplation, except of the mysteries of divinity, which are far more dangerous to get wrong.

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