Quote Originally Posted by Olimpia View Post
The protagonist in one of my story drafts/beginnings was actually called Lorelei and Sx/So, with the desire for a revolution. She got put into an asylum where she tried to gather a group of revolutionaries, and she'd fall for/seduce the head psychiatrist, so to speak... I put the poem of Loreley by Herman Hesse in the prologue.

So it was nice to see your elaborate take on the Siren archetype.
Ohh nice - Hesse, too! The Beta is going strong there. Reminds me of Sucker Punch when we talk about asylums and female character revolution. Did you publish it somewhere, I might have missed it?
Thanks, I hope you enjoyed the analysis