Sam's poetry corner

[Shazaam]

Here's a song I'm writing now: (has the tone of kind of an 'angry nursery rhyme')

Just shut up, shut up
I've listened long enough
I don't give a fuck
Of what you say I should care about

Shut the fuck up
My will you will submit
I don't give a shit
This is it
I'm breaking through

Fuck you
And all that you do
Lying to get money
That will never be me
You won't ever touch dignity

Shut the fuck up
Don't tell me what to do
You don't know anything (this part has a kind of 'twilight' echo to it)

Call me what you will
See me how you want to see me
Condescending and pampered
You don't know anything

(Here the tone changes from angry to more at peace and empowering)

I think I'm better than you
I really do
I think I'm better than you
(you're only better than who you're better than)

[dinki]

!

That's quite good. But it made me rofl because it reminds me of me and my IEI friends little FUCK!neurotic freak outs.

Put more up. Put more up.

:wink::wink:

^^

[Gilly]

Can we make this the Beta poetry corner?