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    Default Sam's poetry corner

    Here's a song I'm writing now: (has the tone of kind of an 'angry nursery rhyme')

    Just shut up, shut up
    I've listened long enough
    I don't give a fuck
    Of what you say I should care about

    Shut the fuck up
    My will you will submit
    I don't give a shit
    This is it
    I'm breaking through

    Fuck you
    And all that you do
    Lying to get money
    That will never be me
    You won't ever touch dignity

    Shut the fuck up
    Don't tell me what to do
    You don't know anything (this part has a kind of 'twilight' echo to it)

    Call me what you will
    See me how you want to see me
    Condescending and pampered
    You don't know anything

    (Here the tone changes from angry to more at peace and empowering)

    I think I'm better than you
    I really do
    I think I'm better than you
    (you're only better than who you're better than)

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    !

    That's quite good. But it made me rofl because it reminds me of me and my IEI friends little FUCK!neurotic freak outs.

    Put more up. Put more up.

    :wink::wink:

    ^^
    IEI, sp/sx 4w3.

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    Can we make this the Beta poetry corner?
    But, for a certainty, back then,
    We loved so many, yet hated so much,
    We hurt others and were hurt ourselves...

    Yet even then, we ran like the wind,
    Whilst our laughter echoed,
    Under cerulean skies...

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