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    Help us, the newbies, by writing a Haiku to describe your type.

    Haiku in Japanese has three lines written one right after another, with 17 syllables -- the first line contains five syllables, the second has seven, and the last has five.


    ISTp (SLI)
    Winter mind, cold, deep
    sun breaks warmly on your face
    icy winds return
    ISTp
    SLI

    Enneagram 5 with a side of wings.

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    Quote Originally Posted by ollobollo View Post
    SLI

    ISTPjim
    here are three haikus for you
    hope they're adequate

    I am on the beach
    I am having a good time
    the sun warms my face

    I go for a swim
    the water cools my skin
    I eat a cookie
    Ah the simple SLI life.
    ISTp
    SLI

    Enneagram 5 with a side of wings.

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    LSE


    "force", the motto sounds
    drive, "integrity", soldier,
    "a sense of duty"

    (It's not original, because it's said somewhere "The LSE's motto sounds: 'force, integrity, and a sense of duty". Perhaps the lack of creativity, or, modification of something else, should be noted. Also, I couldn't think of a better word to put in 'soldier''s place.)


    Another, more original/organic haiku... (similar, but based off my own self)

    news, friends, values, work;
    who, what, how do we support?
    let's chat over good food.

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    I hate poetry
    Emotions are horrible
    This really does suck
    Easy Day

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    ESE

    The warm sun of spring
    That makes your heart swell and sing
    We are here for you

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    Mostly productive
    secretly wishing to be
    unpredictable


    Eat, work, play, fuck, sleep
    others think we SLIs
    make it look easy


    (I keep trying to put the other elements in: first two lines set up the situation and the third line changes direction; also there's supposed to be a reference to seasons or at least something in nature. Oh, well.)
    Quote Originally Posted by Charles Bukowski
    We're all going to die, all of us, what a circus! That alone should make us love each other but it doesn't. We are terrorized and flattened by trivialities, we are eaten up by nothing.
    SLI

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    Quote Originally Posted by iAnnAu View Post
    (I keep trying to put the other elements in: first two lines set up the situation and the third line changes direction; also there's supposed to be a reference to seasons or at least something in nature. Oh, well.)
    Yeah. That is so. I totally disregarded such, mm.

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    Quote Originally Posted by iAnnAu View Post
    Mostly productive
    secretly wishing to be
    unpredictable


    Eat, work, play, fuck, sleep
    others think we SLIs
    make it look easy


    (I keep trying to put the other elements in: first two lines set up the situation and the third line changes direction; also there's supposed to be a reference to seasons or at least something in nature. Oh, well.)
    I didn't know we had so many poets...and limerick writers.
    ISTp
    SLI

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    INFp - cobbled together from various descriptions:

    I think I love you.
    Since when do you talk like THAT?!
    Ugh, go fuck yourself.
    "How could we forget those ancient myths that stand at the beginning of all races, the myths about dragons that at the last moment are transformed into princesses? Perhaps all the dragons in our lives are princesses who are only waiting to see us act, just once, with beauty and courage. Perhaps everything that frightens us is, in its deepest essence, something helpless that wants our love."
    -- Rainer Maria Rilke, Letters to a Young Poet

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    oooh fun thread! I really like all of the haikus so far!

    Here are IEE ones. The first may not be type-related.

    I like cookies too
    because they are so tasty
    give me cookie now!

    meeting new people
    to decide how great they are
    and if I can trust them too
    Hi! I'm an ENFP. :-)

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    Quote Originally Posted by jewels View Post
    oooh fun thread! I really like all of the haikus so far!

    Here are IEE ones. The first may not be type-related.

    I like cookies too
    because they are so tasty
    give me cookie now!

    meeting new people
    to decide how great they are
    and if I can trust them too
    IEE (ENFPs) will be good at this. In touch with their inner muse.
    ISTp
    SLI

    Enneagram 5 with a side of wings.

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    Quote Originally Posted by ISTPjim View Post
    IEE (ENFPs) will be good at this. In touch with their inner muse.
    That is almost a haiku right there. hmm...maybe ISTps naturally write in haiku form.

    will be good at this
    in touch with their inner muse
    ?

    I'd say ENFps write in rambling blog post form.
    Hi! I'm an ENFP. :-)

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    Quote Originally Posted by Baby View Post
    INFp - cobbled together from various descriptions:

    I think I love you.
    Since when do you talk like THAT?!
    Ugh, go fuck yourself.
    that probably sums up my dating experiences w/ INFps.
    Hi! I'm an ENFP. :-)

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    quien será que de lejos
    vino a rezar a esta tumba,
    y apenas rezó.

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    For the LII's

    Flying black circle
    Please do not hit my PoLR
    You will regret it
    LII-Ne with strong EII tendencies, 6w7-9w1-3w4 so/sp/sx, INxP



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    Quote Originally Posted by normal View Post
    quien será que de lejos
    vino a rezar a esta tumba,
    y apenas rezó.
    Profundo.

    I like cookies too
    because they are so tasty
    give me cookie now!
    This made me laugh, so random .

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