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    Default I wrote an Alpha Story. I think...

    Well, there was this writing contest at my school where you get 50 dollars if you win.

    So I plotted and planned and thought up this story, and it ended up being a 1851 Street Urchin Romantic Tragedy. I guess. And the romance part was very Alpha.


    Here ya go.
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    not sure, I handed it in today. Probably in three weeks or so, christmas break just started.
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    I appreciate it.
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    Also, I don't get why the pear changed into a peach.
    "Language is the Rubicon that divides man from beast."

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    wow massive fail.
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    Don't worry. It only ups the story's magical quality. :-p
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    w/e it sucked. 16 other people viewed the thread and only you and carla answered back.
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    Quote Originally Posted by Kamangir View Post
    w/e it sucked. 16 other people viewed the thread and only you and carla answered back.
    Aww cheer up. <3 I can't answer for anyone else, but I liked it. (c:
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    I liked it very much, but I hate that I'm a proof reader sometimes. Was it a pear or a peach? But loved it yeah

    sadface though
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    it was a pear, lol.

    Thanks for replying.
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    <3 I actually read it early last night (it's now 2pm the next day) and was quite contentedly mulling it over until now
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    Well, I got the results of the contest today. I got third place, a 25 dollar prize. I am happy.
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