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    Default This poem I found

    What type of feeling would this piece convey?

    "Seeing your face was only the first.
    After that I was enthralled.
    Living day to day, enamored.
    I began to think things
    I never believed could have been thought.
    I dreamt without understanding,
    felt without comprehending.
    Who are you
    my life, my dreams?

    Only infatuation can tell."
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    Who wrote this? I like it.

    Kind of reminds of some of the stuff I used to write. Definitely seems to have a pretty good Fi component to it. As for the 'type' of feeling, maybe wonderment? Seeing in someone else something important, valuable, worthwhile? Something new and complete like the missing pieces of a puzzle? Something like that.
    Moonlight will fall
    Winter will end
    Harvest will come
    Your heart will mend

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    I actually wrote this in july.

    Kinda signed it off as too mushy.
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    Default Re: This poem I found

    There is actually a lot of Ne in this poem. Like "I began to think things I never believed could have been thought."

    Plus the question at the end - this poem sounds like it's supposed to make you wonder (edit: like what munenori said, basically).

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    Ahh, had to look up Ne cuz I had never heard of it used before.

    Ok cool, I should learn my shapes/personality things better so I can do this for myself, xD.
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